A little poem i wrote about the hunger strike
GermanGlenfiddich |
Nov 16 2004, 03:26 PM
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a little poem i wrote about the hunger strikers...we had to write a poem about a sujet of our choice and it had to have ten "new" words in it...so out of lack of anything interesting in MY life ( except for things which I wouldn't tell my teachers about ) , I wrote one about the Ten Brave Men
Refusal When we refused to lie About us, our genuine cause For three days no food slid through When we refused to lie When we refused to speak The judges did not listen And they told us to confess When we refused to speak When we refused to learn They chided us as traitors And branded us as liars When we refused to learn When we refused to think Not a single decent man Came to explain our cause When we refused to think When we refused their tongue And just spoke the ancient one They raged at us with insults When we refused their tongue When we refused to hear Came shallow propaganda They tried to lure us back outside When we refused to hear When we refused to cry They�d beat us with their clubs Torture us with cig�rette stubs When we refused to cry When we refused to eat Our whole families were sent To bring us off our last way That we had wished to go When we refused acceptance Of their inhumane rules They carried us out of the Maze We had refused to break |
Charlotte |
Nov 19 2004, 03:33 PM
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Unity, Freedom and Peace supporter Group: Celtic Lyrics Moderator Posts: 630 Joined: 29-March 03 From: Paris, France Member No.: 6 |
QUOTE When we refused to hear Came shallow propaganda They tried to lure us back outside When I refused to hear I just wondered why it changed from "we refused" to "I refused"? A nice hommage to the hunger strikers. |
GermanGlenfiddich |
Nov 20 2004, 09:18 AM
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L Group: Member Posts: 51 Joined: 27-May 04 From: Germany Member No.: 360 |
that's an uncorrected mistake...i wrote it in "I"-form first and then changed it to "we" cause i thought i wasn't "feely" about it enough
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Charlotte |
Nov 20 2004, 10:30 AM
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Unity, Freedom and Peace supporter Group: Celtic Lyrics Moderator Posts: 630 Joined: 29-March 03 From: Paris, France Member No.: 6 |
Alright then !
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